final version after much fretting and cropping...!!!
I cropped this drawing because I was not very happy with the original image, I loved the grandmothers face but I felt the girls face was not quite right, I think it works ok with just the childs hand... but I'm happiest with the cropped version of them both.
13 comments:
This image is so lovely! I love it. It makes wrinkles a position of honor and love! Great job!
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Wonderful this is a true representation of what a nan has to give. It makes me feel warm inside when i remember my nan and i hope wrinkles look as good on me!!!!
This piece communicates so much! I love the girl's face! I think you did a terrific job.
So thoughtful! All three are wonderful but your final one has great impact!
Each and every one of them is beautiful. Wonderful and touching!!
No need to fret! All your work is beautiful!
Beautiful and so tender.
this is such a beautiful piece.
carli
Aw, that's sweet.
Beautiful work.
wow...if i had a kitkat for every fret over a crop, to a final image...yikes! but clearly, kathy, your smart eye dictated it very well. the crop makes it that more intimate. and, i really like the girl's face. i think i see what you don't like, but i think that only HELPS make her younger, the less wiser of the 2. it's a lovely, lovely piece. :))
thankyou for your comments..
I actually like the cropped version better. It puts the focus on their eyes and brings an intimacy to the illustration. This is very effective! YOu are so talented!
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